Comments on: laughing at an empty shower http://sbetelmal.com/silly-ink/laughing-at-an-empty-shower/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=laughing-at-an-empty-shower in the name of the restlessness ... Wed, 21 Dec 2011 09:58:37 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: سراج|Mafkoud http://sbetelmal.com/silly-ink/laughing-at-an-empty-shower/comment-page-1/#comment-341 سراج|Mafkoud Sat, 30 Jan 2010 00:56:35 +0000 http://sbetelmal.com/?p=342#comment-341 you see I never read it before, I only wrote it :P I can see what you mean, it needs some fixing , might do it over the weekend cheers man you see I never read it before, I only wrote it :P

I can see what you mean, it needs some fixing , might do it over the weekend

cheers man

]]> By: Detro http://sbetelmal.com/silly-ink/laughing-at-an-empty-shower/comment-page-1/#comment-340 Detro Sat, 30 Jan 2010 00:42:41 +0000 http://sbetelmal.com/?p=342#comment-340 Man, I read this thing 3 times, hoping now, with a free mind, I would get it. But no. Nothing. I don't get what the heck are u saying. I think is the over-usage of pronouns: I get lost in too many he and she without a proper name. Man, I read this thing 3 times, hoping now, with a free mind, I would get it. But no. Nothing. I don’t get what the heck are u saying.
I think is the over-usage of pronouns: I get lost in too many he and she without a proper name.

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